写作范文：2013年12月7日雅思a类大作文
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2013年12月7日雅思a类大作文范文：
题目：it is important to preserve both the culture and environment of the places visiting, but some think it is impossible to be a responsible tourist. do you agree or disagree？（ =260 words）
分析：
论点：some think it is impossible to be responsible tourist; others think it is possible to be responsible tourist
保护你所旅游地方的环境和文化是很重要的，但是一些人认为成为一个有责任的旅行者是不太可能的，你认同还是不认同？
范文：
第一段思路分析： 社会背景描述+正向/ 反向观点+自己的观点=60 words
facilitating the tourism, as the pillar of the economy, to realize sustainable and benignant development means safeguarding its culture and ecosystem. however, some individuals deem that it is inconceivable for tourists to fulfill the obligations of environmental protection. after serious analyses, i am convinced that tourists should undertake the duty-bound obligations that harmonize the connection between humans and their surroundings.
第二段 ：思路分析： 论点 +论据 +例证+让步句=80 words
on one hand, protecting the cultures and environments of scenic spots is the compelling obligations for tourists. in other words, without correct consciousness and behavior of doing so, environmental conservation is out of the question. for instance, beijing, the cultural and historical capital, is visited by tens of millions of travelers annually, each of whom sticks up for the protection of the city visage and its cultural inheritance spontaneously. otherwise, consequences are unbearable to contemplate, due to lack of responsibility.
第三段： 思路分析： 论点 +论据 +例证 +结论=77 words
on the other hand, admittedly, the behavior of damaging ecological environment and cultural atmosphere can also be seen conspicuously, such as a chinese signature emerging on the egyptian pyramids, which not only tramples the civilization of egypt, but also undermines the image of chinese tourists. however, such behavior, after all, is seen occasionally. the overwhelming majority of travelers will be volunteers of protecting culture and surroundings of tourist attractions, in consideration of tourists’ qualities and spontaneous will.
第四段：总结段： 观点的概括总结=43 words
on balance, people who live in highly civilized current society treat the journey as a way to cultivate one’s taste and cultivate body and mind, so cherishing the culture and environment of tourist destinations is a mission possible instead of the “impossible mission”.
词汇学习：
preserve：vt.保护；保持，保存；腌制食物；防腐处理
vi.保鲜；保持原状；做蜜饯；禁猎
n.蜜饯；防护用品；禁猎地；独占的事物（或范围）
第三人称单数：preserves过去式：preserved过去分词：preserved现在分词：preserving
individuals：n.[口语]人（常指有趣或有点特别的人）( individual的名词复数 )；与众不同的人；某种类型的人
deem：vt.认为，视为；主张，断定
vi.认为，视为，以为；作某种评价
第三人称单数：deems过去式：deemed过去分词：deemed现在分词：deeming
易混淆的单词：deemdeem
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