雅思写作--增强语句表现力
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摘要: 雅思写作雅思写作--增强语句表现力北京环球雅思|环球雅思|雅思写作--增强语句表现力
北京环球雅思小编为大家带来增强语句表现力的五张王牌，考生可以借鉴参考一下，以下是具体内容：
1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如：
weak: the trees are bare. the grass is brown. the landscape seems drab. revision:the brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)
or: the landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)
2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如：
1) weak: the team members are good players.
revision: the team members play well.
2) weak: one worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.
revision: one worker's plan eliminates tardiness.
3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中，把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例如：
1) weak: there is no opportunity for promotion.
revision: no opportunity for promotion exists.
2) weak: here are the books you ordered.
revision: the books you ordered have arrived.
二、多用语意具体的动词，保持句意简洁明了。例如：
1、poor: my supervisor went past my desk.
better: my supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.
2、poor: she is a careful shopper.
better: she compares prices and quality.
希望以上内容可以帮助大家哦，最后，小编祝所有烤鸭们考试顺利！
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