范文：2014年2月22日雅思a类大作文
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2014年2月22日雅思a类大作文题目：educating children is expensive and the government of some countries pays some of or all of the costs. do the advantages of the government paying for the costs outweigh the disadvantages?
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思路指导+范文：
第一段， 引出话题，表明我方立场
free education system is increasingly welcomed in many countries. a vast number of children can indeed benefit from this free policy(从这一免费政策中受益). for my part, however, the disadvantages of free or subsidized education prevail over its advantages.(然而，在我看来，免费或补贴式教育的弊大于利)
第二段，免费或补贴式教育坏处一：给政府造成经济负担，因为贫困问题在很多国家依然严重，因此政府要首先考虑如何脱贫
in the first place, the free policy will impose a huge financial burden on the government(给政府带来巨大财政负担). be it a developing or developed country, there are still a number of needy people struggling on poverty line(在贫困线上挣扎的穷人). therefore, the government should spend limited public funds helping the needy get rid of poverty(脱贫) at first; then, the government can reflect on(认真考虑) whether or not children’s education can be free or subsidized.
第三段，免费货补贴式教育坏处二：免费儿童教育意味着提高全民税收，而这对未受益者来说显然是不公平的
in the second place, this free policy means that(意味着) everyone has to pay higher taxes in order for the government to provide this opportunity. however, it does not hide the fact that(然而，这并未掩盖住一个事实) those who do not use this opportunity would be forced to pay for something that they would not benefit from. in view of this, children’s free education only benefits a small group of young students, rather than the entire nation.
第三段，让步：免费政策给儿童提供均等的入学机会;反驳：让学生自己缴学费更能激发他们努力学习的动力
on the other hand, some others may argue that children’s free education provides equal opportunities of attending school for everyone. teenagers born in poor families(穷人家的孩子) can also grasp the chance to go to school and acquire knowledge. while this point of views sounds reasonable, we should realize that students tend to work harder, if they can pay for the tuition by themselves, because they want to get their money’s worth(钱花的值).
第四段，总结，免费教育并非那么完美，政府不妨以奖学金的形式来进行教育补贴
in conclusion, providing children’s education for free is not as good as many people expected(不如人们想象中那么好). children’s education might as well(不妨) come to school-age students(到了上学年龄的儿童) in the form of scholarship, which can inspire them to work hard(激励他们努力学习).
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